Here’s a shortened version of your story that keeps the core emotions and events intact, but trims down the length:
Natalie and I were together for five years. We met young, and by the time the spark faded, we just stopped trying. No big fights—just quiet distance. Now, we live in different states, and the only thing connecting us is our three-year-old son, Oliver.
We kept things civil. Every night, Natalie video-called so I could say goodnight to Oliver. That routine meant everything to me.
Then, one evening, everything changed.
“Greg, our son’s gone!” she screamed over the phone.
“Oliver is dead!”
I was crushed. No warning, no explanation—just grief. I tried to call her back, desperate for answers. She said it happened fast. That he was gone, buried. I couldn’t believe it.
The next day, as I was packing to fly out, her husband Mike called.
“Greg… Oliver’s alive.”
Natalie had lied. She made it up to keep me away. Her reasoning? She was pregnant and feared I’d take Oliver from her.
I was furious. Heartbroken. She’d let me believe our son was dead.
When I confronted her, she broke down, admitting she panicked. I told her I wasn’t there to take Oliver away, but if anything like this ever happened again, I’d involve the courts.
Then I heard it—little footsteps.
“Daddy!”
Oliver ran into my arms. I held him and didn’t let go.
Afterward, I insisted we start counseling. Mike supported the idea—he was the one who told me the truth. I respected him for that.
Back home, the distance from Oliver was unbearable. I knew what I had to do. I opened my laptop and started looking for jobs near him.
I wasn’t going to be far away again.
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