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I woke up to silence—the hum of the fridge, the creaks of an old house. The other pillow lay untouched. Two years ago, mornings meant coffee, newspaper rustles, and Sarah’s sleepy smile. Now it’s just me and the echo of grief.
My freelance job let me disappear. I ignored my sister’s calls like always. Then one day, I found a letter in my mailbox: To Dad. It wasn’t for me. Inside, a little girl named Lily had written to her late father, apologizing for things she said and sharing how she missed catching butterflies with him.
Sarah and I had talked about having kids. That letter broke something open in me. I returned it to Lily’s mom, who explained Lily lost her dad last year and still wrote him. But how did her letter end up in my box?
A few days later, I saw Lily slipping another letter into the mailbox of the abandoned Miller house. That night, I checked—it was empty. Someone was taking them.
Curious, I watched. Eventually, I saw a man collect the letter with care. I followed him home. His name was Daniel—Lily’s uncle. He admitted he’d been reading her letters but never answered. He’d vanished after her dad, his brother, died. Guilt kept him away.
He showed me the stack of letters he’d written but never sent. I saw myself in him. After Sarah died, I shut everyone out too.
Later, I visited Sarah’s grave for the first time in ages. Talking to her made something shift. I wanted to try living again.
So I convinced Daniel to come with me to Lily’s house. Her mom was hesitant, but when Lily saw him, she asked, “Don’t you care about me?” His tears said it all. She forgave him. He gave her the letters. She promised to read every one.
As they reconnected, I quietly left.
That night, I answered a call I’d ignored for two years—from my old friend Mike. We talked like no time had passed.
Sometimes, someone else’s pain helps you face your own. Healing doesn’t mean forgetting—it means remembering, and moving forward anyway.
I still don’t know how Lily’s letter ended up in my mailbox. Maybe it was chance. Maybe Daniel. Or maybe… Sarah.
Maybe she knew I needed it.
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