Sure! Here’s a shorter version of the story that keeps the emotional depth and main plot intact:
Emma and Dylan shared their first dance in bliss, but Emma couldn’t help but feel the absence of her parents. Their moment was interrupted by Mr. Scotliff, the hotel manager, who said someone named Martha—Emma’s estranged grandmother—was asking for her.
Despite Dylan’s protests, Emma stepped outside. Martha called her beautiful and offered a gift, but Emma was cold. “You weren’t invited for a reason,” she said. Emma blamed Martha for her father’s imprisonment and death, believing Martha refused to help when Emma begged her to sell her bakery to pay for legal fees. Emma lashed out and told her to leave forever.
As Emma held the gift—a red jewelry box—she threw it on the ground in anger. It shattered, revealing an emerald ring and a note from Martha. In it, Martha explained she hadn’t helped because Emma’s father had hurt many people and didn’t deserve saving. She said she kept the bakery for Emma and was leaving her more through a lawyer.
Shaken, Emma rushed to Martha’s house the next day but found strangers moving in. A neighbor, Judy, revealed Martha had sold the house and moved after being diagnosed with terminal cancer. Emma rushed to a local motel, but it was too late—Martha had passed away the night before.
Overcome with grief and regret, Emma realized the truth too late.
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