Sure! Here’s a shorter version of the story that keeps the core meaning and emotional weight intact:
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My parents always wanted a boy. When I was born, they were disappointed. I spent my life trying to earn their approval, but it was never enough.
When I married Jordan, they adored him instantly—more than they ever loved me. He wanted a child, and at first, I did too. But after a year of trying, I felt hopeless. Tests revealed I had diminished ovarian reserve. IVF was our only chance.
Jordan was supportive—at first. But when my parents found out, they called me a disgrace. My mother screamed, “You should’ve been a boy!” That broke me. I told them I was done trying to please them.
Then Jordan changed. Distant. Cold. Eventually, he asked for a divorce. I was heartbroken, but the final blow came when I saw my parents at court—there for him, not me. He moved in with them after.
I started therapy and decided to pursue motherhood on my own. The first IVF round failed, but the second worked. I named my daughter Hope. She became my light.
One day, I saw my parents and Jordan while walking with Hope. They were shocked and asked to be part of her life.
I looked them in the eyes and said no. “You don’t deserve her.”
Then I walked away—for good. I had lost so much, but I had gained everything I needed.
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