Sure! Here’s a much shorter version that keeps the main points and emotional arc intact:
Vivienne’s daughter, Monica, stormed out after revealing she was marrying a man named Zach—news that shocked Vivienne, who had no idea Monica had broken up with Anthony, her wealthy, well-connected ex. Worried about Zach’s background, Vivienne disguised herself and visited Mystic, where she met a rude, drunk man named Zach in a rundown house with a screaming girlfriend. Horrified, she left, convinced Monica was making a huge mistake.
But on her way home, a kind stranger offered her a ride to Hartford. He was polite, thoughtful, and nothing like the man she had met earlier. She later realized she forgot to ask his name but was grateful for his help.
The next evening, Monica arrived for dinner—with her boyfriend Zach. To Vivienne’s shock, it was the same man who had given her a ride—the kind one. It turned out there were two Zachs in Mystic, and she had visited the wrong one. Vivienne was overjoyed and apologized, and the earlier tension with Monica faded into laughter.
Would you like it even shorter, like a tweet-length summary?
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