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You never think your own child will treat you like a stranger—but that’s what happened with Stuart. I chalked it up to growing up, moving out, being busy. I missed the boy who once brought me daisies and helped with groceries unasked.
When he did call—rarely—it was usually just a quick check-in. But one day, he was warm. He asked to use my house for a small birthday gathering. I was so touched that I said yes.
I stayed at my friend Martha’s, not hearing any noise from my place. I even dared to hope we were reconnecting.
But the next morning, I returned to find my home wrecked—door broken, window shattered, furniture burned, glass and beer cans everywhere. A note on the counter read: “We had a wild party to say goodbye to our youth. You might need to tidy up.”
I called Stuart over and over, finally leaving a furious voicemail, threatening to sue.
Later, Martha invited me over and said she’d decided to move into a retirement home. Stuart showed up too, smiling—thinking she’d gift him her estate. She had planned to, until she saw what he’d done to me.
Instead, she gave it all to me—her house, her future estate—because she said I was the one who deserved it.
Stuart exploded, shouting that he didn’t need us, then stormed out. The room fell quiet.
I cried—not just for the kindness I’d received, but for the son I no longer recognized. It was a bittersweet victory. I’d been given so much… but lost something too.
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