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The house still smelled like him—cedar, coffee, and that cologne he always overused. I kept breathing it in, afraid it would fade like he had.
One day he was joking about turning ninety. The next, he was gone. Car crash. Fatal.
I came home and never left. My apartment sat empty while I stayed in the house where grief felt grounded. Elizabeth, my former seventh-grade teacher turned stepmother, was polite but distant. Her kids ran wild, too young to understand.
She acted like the house was hers. I stayed quiet—cooking, cleaning, grieving. Until she handed me an envelope. A bill. Rent. Utilities. Food. For living in my own childhood room.
She had no idea the house was mine. Dad left it to me in his will—filed and final.
So I gave her my own envelope. Not a check, but a notice. My lawyer spelled it out: she had no claim. Her face crumbled. She sputtered threats. None held.
I gave her thirty days. The day she left, she didn’t say goodbye.
In the silence that followed, I found pieces of him everywhere—his handwriting, his old records, a note that said, “You’ll always be Dad’s girl.”
I cried then, not from pain but from being seen. I let my apartment go. This was home now. Not a shrine to the past, but a place I could fill with life again.
So I adopted two rescue puppies—Peanut and Butter. Dad would’ve loved the names. Mom would’ve made them sweaters.
Now I sit on the porch at dusk, tea in hand, dogs by my side.
Elizabeth once taught me how to be small. But in the end, I passed her final lesson—on my terms.
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