Sure! Here’s a much shorter version that keeps the heart of the story intact:
I never expected to confront my ex-husband’s new wife, but after years of mistreating my daughter Rachel, Karen finally went too far. Rachel, 16, dreams of being a fashion designer and worked hard to buy her own sewing machine. One weekend, Karen threw it in the pool as punishment for not doing chores fast enough. Her father, Mark, just stood by.
I picked Rachel up immediately and promised to make things right. With help from a friend posing as a cop, we staged a fake laptop confiscation to show Karen what it feels like to lose something important. Rachel filmed the whole thing and delivered a powerful message.
Karen was humiliated and paid Rachel back. Now, Rachel lives with me full-time and only sees her dad on her terms. She has a new sewing machine and a lot more peace.
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