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I first met Nathan when he was six—shy, wide-eyed, hiding behind his father’s leg on our third date. Richard had told me he had a son, but meeting him stirred something deep in me.
“This is Victoria,” Richard said gently. “She’s the lady I told you about.” I knelt down, smiled, and handed Nathan a gift—a paleontology book. Richard later said he kept it under his pillow for weeks.
When Richard proposed six months later, I asked Nathan’s permission before saying yes.
His mother had been gone two years. I never tried to replace her, just found my place in Nathan’s life. Richard and I never had kids—Nathan filled our home with enough love.
When Richard died suddenly five years ago, Nathan had just gotten into college. I broke the news, and he quietly asked, “What happens now?” What he meant was: Are we still a family?
Yes. Always yes.
I supported him through college, sat at his graduation, helped him prepare for his first job—everything his dad would’ve done. At graduation, he gave me a necklace engraved Strength. I wore it every day, including his wedding.
The ceremony was elegant, at a vineyard. I’d met his fiancée, Melissa—lovely, from a close-knit family. As I found my seat, she approached me and said, with a smile, “The front row is for biological moms only.”
Heartbroken, I nodded. “Of course.”
I sat quietly at the back, gift in hand, reminding myself: this is his day.
Then the music began, and Nathan started down the aisle—but stopped. He turned, found my face, and said, “I wouldn’t be here without someone who stepped up when no one else did.”
He walked to me, took my hand, and said, “You’re not sitting in the back. You stayed. Walk me down the aisle, Mom.”
Mom. He had never called me that before.
At the altar, he pulled out a chair for me in the front row. “Sit here,” he said, “where you belong.”
At the reception, his first toast was: “To the woman who didn’t give birth to me, but gave me life all the same.”
I leaned in and whispered, “Your dad would be so proud of you.”
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