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Miranda’s breakup was public and painful, plunging her into depression. As an immigrant trying to stay afloat, she pushed herself to keep working. One day, late again to her restaurant job, she apologized to her boss, Michael. He gave her a final warning, urging her to stay professional.
Things got worse when she had to serve her ex, Colin, and his new girlfriend, Leslie—college mates who’d humiliated her before. They mocked her background and job, made rude comments, and even spilled food on her. Humiliated, Miranda hid in the kitchen and broke down crying.
Chef Robert comforted her, and she opened up about her past: Colin had tricked her into going to a party, where she woke up in a compromising situation. Leslie and Colin had set her up as part of a cruel bet. She was nearly expelled and completely isolated.
Back in the present, Miranda asked Robert for a small act of revenge—make their food extremely spicy. Though hesitant, he helped discreetly. When Colin used a spice-soaked napkin, he choked, causing a scene. Leslie fled in embarrassment.
Colin accused Miranda, but Michael stood by her, discreetly hiding the napkin and defending her integrity. “Sometimes the heat isn’t from the food, but how we treat others,” he told Colin.
Miranda, grateful and empowered, realized that even in hardship, support and justice can come from unexpected places.
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