Sure! Here’s a much shorter version of the story that preserves the core meaning:
My sister Beth has always been a dreamer—creative, passionate, and deeply romantic. While I was practical, Beth believed in fairy tales and true love. Her heart broke after a long-term boyfriend, Marcus, cheated on her, sending her into a deep emotional spiral. She withdrew from everyone and eventually sought healing at a retreat in Arizona.
When she returned, she said she’d met someone named Nathaniel and quickly announced their engagement. But none of us ever met him—there were always vague excuses. On her wedding day, as Beth stood alone at the altar, our dad interrupted the ceremony. He’d found a journal in her dressing room filled with letters to Nathaniel—a man who never existed.
Beth had imagined the entire relationship. She broke down, and we realized she needed professional help. She was later diagnosed with a dissociative coping disorder rooted in past trauma. With therapy and support, she slowly healed.
Years later, Beth met someone real—Jordan. Their relationship grew slowly and honestly. When they married, it was in our parents’ backyard, and this time, her groom was truly there, smiling back at her.
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