Original:
My name is Lisa. I’ve been married to Tom for four years. Tom works in an office, has a good position, and earns a great salary. We have a nice house, two cars, and a dog named Max. On the outside, our life looks perfect. But today, things took a turn.
Shortened without losing meaning:
I’m Lisa, married to Tom for four years. We have a comfortable life—perfectly ordinary: his good job, our home, two cars, and our dog Max. Yet today, everything changed.